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even at school you look happy
people ask me whats wrong
i look away and say nothing
everyone know its you
that makes me this way
one day after school
i talked to someone
she told me to choose one
thatshow this whole mess started
i try to tell you
but when i get the chance
either...
you ignore me or
i cant come out and say it
four simple words
i still love you
why cant i say it...
why cant i let you go...
why...why...
why cant he just kill me...
my heart aches too much
i wear this ring to remember
how much you loved me
and how much i loved you...
©2006-2009 ~vampirehitomi
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old poem bokk just found it

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:iconferaldruidx:
yay im the first to comment YAY!!!!! I likes it
:iconraythehedgehog:
touching...

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Intelligence is to ask "how?", and wisdom is to ask "why?".
:iconabeautiful-lie:
:wow:..you touched me...you will pay...read my poems and tell me of what you think....see if you are touched on of them im still working on ill put it in when i find out how to use my new jumpdrive key..lol
:iconvampirehitomi:
*confussed* who is this .... and thanks you very much i read your peom too and i loved them ^^
:iconvampirehitomi:
thanks ........ *sighs* its about you..... all of my poems are about you mostly
:iconjeszkrgr:
Awe. . .Very sad, but very beautiful. . .like all your poems. . .

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:iconvampirehitomi:
thanks you * glomp* i love you teehee jk jk
:iconabeautiful-lie:
thanks...don't worry i don't bite..*hard*..lol..not really...just trying to make friends

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