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three wishes by ~vampirehitomi:iconvampirehitomi:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


if i only had three wishes
that could be granted
they would all  deal with you
becasue all the feelings
you make my body go through

I would wish to see your smile
because it makes my body ease
by one glance it makes
the beat of my heart freeze
your smile brings soothing to my body

so delightful and so calm
it catches my feelings like no other
to be held in the heart of your palm

my next wish would be
your hugs that make everything feel like a dream
where i never want to wake up
because by one touch of your arms
i have everything i need

My last wish would be your kisses
which are such a heavenly treasure
as your lips touch against mine
the whole world stops
for a moment to be remembered

its more than words will ever
say by just one kiss
its a way of unspoken words
that brings sweet softness and mist

better yet if i had three WORDS
like wishes granted and they can be
whatever and whenever.
the three words would be
us...
together...
forever...
©2006-2009 ~vampirehitomi
:iconvampirehitomi:

Author's Comments

soooo depressed and i dont know what to do i want some one to make him read this but then there is something inside me that says not to ..... so confussed

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~loveisforhumansnotme Apr 12, 2006, 2:20:57 PM
i lovers this *glomp*

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"You should have learned by now this is a kill or be killed world; if you're too weak to help yourself- you deserve to fall."-Hiei and -Hiei-Minamino-17
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~RaytheHedgehog Apr 14, 2006, 4:26:38 AM
awe...that's sweet

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Intelligence is to ask "how?", and wisdom is to ask "why?".
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~vampirehitomi Apr 18, 2006, 10:05:46 AM
really i doooo tooooo i was like blah when i did it
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~loveisforhumansnotme Apr 18, 2006, 12:05:33 PM
XD at least your better

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"You should have learned by now this is a kill or be killed world; if you're too weak to help yourself- you deserve to fall."-Hiei and -Hiei-Minamino-17
:iconvampirehitomi:
~vampirehitomi Apr 19, 2006, 3:55:38 AM
yeah sometimes .... when i see him in school im all like sadness...... but then i think of alex and im happy
:iconloveisforhumansnotme:
~loveisforhumansnotme Apr 19, 2006, 10:45:16 AM
me too ;-;

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"You should have learned by now this is a kill or be killed world; if you're too weak to help yourself- you deserve to fall."-Hiei and -Hiei-Minamino-17
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~Jakishot935 Aug 24, 2006, 9:55:23 AM
This rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Love is a beautiful rose:rose:
No water for the rose and the rose will die
no passion for your love and it will die:blackrose:
oh and by the way I AM A MAJOR FANGIRL^^
[link] this song is very true^^
:iconvampirehitomi:
~vampirehitomi Aug 25, 2006, 7:05:50 AM
thank you *smiles*

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~kat pity the fool who dont wrap his tool~
~Cigarettes + Cup Noodles = Instant Ash Tray~
~to be a man you need honor and a penis kat* erika i guess we cant be men we dont have honor
~action bastard says"put your mouth on a sausage"~
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